biodamped: for better or for worse ([kh] take a look at my stars)
i will write in words of fire ([personal profile] biodamped) wrote in [personal profile] jaydee 2010-05-05 08:45 am (UTC)

T'is a shame your mood was bitter, for that is truly a very pretty sonnet. I do like crossed-line sentences, they're the clever ones. Just because the rhyme ends at the end of a line doesn't mean the sentence always should.

*smishy squish*
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